Thread:Waterwecna/@comment-4190137-20120417092821/@comment-4062486-20120417100546

Okay, since you asked I can correct the text (I don't usually correct the texts of others unless they ask me to). I think it's good that the story is heading towards the Thriller genre, because this is the genre I haven't written at all. So it is a chance for me to learn how to write darker stories (I especially need experience writing about death).