Thread:Annewbiz/@comment-4623180-20121221130329

Hi, the page you added, Daegel's mother will be up for deletion if you do not improve it asap. Look at the page 'Gwen's mother'. It should include an infobox, categories, appearances, some more information and you need to improve the grammar. The article is far too casual.

Sorry if I seem strict or nitpicky, I understand it may not be a good experience as you may not have made a page before, but this page can be a success, just follow suite to the other pages which have been successful.

Thank you.

13:03, December 21, 2012 (UTC)Dryuuu 