Thread:Ongard Odin/@comment-4623180-20130205163449

Sweet display picture, did you draw it yourself??

And welcome to the Wiki, I am Dryuuu, best known for doing the design for the Wiki, but I've done many more things, like making policies and making the Community page, I could go on but this is your message wall! :D You seem very creative (seeing as you're part of a roleplay Wiki). It's good to see some of that around here! I saw your Fan Fiction as well, it's very well written, but I have to be honest, there were only few similarities that I couldn't help wonder "why", for example Agravaine's servant and Lancelot finding Gwen rather than the Dorocha. I mean, those would've been better (Gaius is an old man and Lancelot likes Gwen so makes more sense for him to go out and do it, and you have to wonder where all the nobles' servants are..) but with minor changes it seems more like feedback rather than a new fan fiction, with this style wouldn't be better just to write about what you would fit in/change rather than writing it all, since it's mainly a recount of the episode? I admit I'm being judgmental and you're only in your early stages of writing the series your way, but I hope you'll appreciate my feedback anyway!

I think you'd do a great job at writing about plots on pages, too. The Knights of the Round Table is one page that needs some work, for instance.

Thank you! ^_^

16:34, February 5, 2013 (UTC)Dryuuu 