Talk:Gilli/@comment-108.231.73.232-20130126055454

I made a couple of minor changes at the beginning of this article, but as I read on I realized it needed far more help than I could give at this time. It starts out in past tense and then switches to present. In the final section it returns to past tense. The second sentence of this section truly boggles the mind. "His obsessed nature most likely contributed from his belief that his father was afraid of magic, and that he felt vunerable when he could not use his magic freely." At this time I don't feel up to trying to turn that into a proper English sentence. Perhaps there is someone else who might be able to do so...