Thread:Waterwecna/@comment-5396944-20121029131257/@comment-4062486-20121030055644

Hey there, Leonardomerlinfan! It is totally okay! Yes, I am a writer. I have been writing stories since I was like 9 years old. It's awesome that your report was posted: I myself have written an article that was highlighted on a journalistic website.

The main problem here is that the writing style of an article and a story is very different. In an article you can only use a limited amount of words, while in a story you can all words to express yourself. Metaphors like "like the sky itself was crying" (aka rain) are not fitting for an article, but definitely are for a story.

As for tips.. If you can tell me what are the exact problems you are faceng, I'll be able to give you better tips. And what do you mean by not getting the stories right? And your fanfic sounds very interesting! Merlin's daemon.. I suppose you have been inspired by the Golden Compass and other books in that series (Northern Lights I think it was)?